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Her voice has always been with me, singing in my head
Enraged when I submit to be that which we are not
Laughing at the fallout, when her words are heard instead
Patiently reminding me of strength that I forgot

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JP.Troy

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  • Judith Chandler
    July 10, 2008

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    Could this be your mother by any chance? Or maybe a teacher or a sister.

    I have all sorts of these admonishments and obsersations going on in my own mind.

    Congrats on the hm.

    jjj


  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 29, 2008
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    I love this. It makes me think of my friend with such "girl problems." Please finish soon.