Her voice has always been with me, singing in my head
Enraged when I submit to be that which we are not
Laughing at the fallout, when her words are heard instead
Patiently reminding me of strength that I forgot
Author notes
JP.Troy
A contest entry
- Darkfield Titles by Dark Sidhe.
750 points, ended January 31, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Could this be your mother by any chance? Or maybe a teacher or a sister.
I have all sorts of these admonishments and obsersations going on in my own mind.
Congrats on the hm.
jjj


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I love this. It makes me think of my friend with such "girl problems." Please finish soon.

