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We Are One

Your tingling touch upon my skin
I feel my heart race deep within
you run your fingers down my spine
this feeling you give me, so divine

Gentle caresses, as we become one
this wonderful love has just begun

each time, better than the last

our breathing becomes one, ever so fast

 

As one we lay intertwined

our love is even more defined

My soul mate you are, chosen for me

we lay here as one, you are my key. 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

Author notes

I've said it a million a times and I will always say it till the day I leave this earth,

You, Randy, my love, my best friend, ARE my heart. YOU are my air. Without you I would surely suffocate. I love you and when I vowed to love you forever, I meant it with every fiber if my being. I love you baby!

Ha! It's been so long since I have wrote anything, please be honest with your comments

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  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 4, 2008

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    So beautifully written!
    Lovely work here as always Jessica.
    It's great to read you again and I
    hope that you are well my friend.
    Take care and keep up the wonderful
    work here!




    Jeremy0826


  • Arizona Sunset
    March 7, 2008

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    oh la la baby girl you heated up the page with this one can tell you got the good stuff from your momma lol Remember...bad stuff comes from daddy shhh don't tell him I said that! love you bunches always~ love the poem~ Momma


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 20, 2008

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    Precious

    Words from the heart and soul that shall soar forevermore with tenderness in each line divine.. Thanks for sharing you. Wonderfully inscribed poetess!

    Peace, Timothy

  • Michael P gold member
    February 8, 2008

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    this is awesome because it bleeds raw emotional contentment. Really how could any 'poet' not appreciate that? I know I do.I loved the final line, like a doorway to oneness. well done


  • Stormy Days
    January 31, 2008
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    this is really good i like it wow... i like this poem it has deep meaning


  • ObscurityJester
    January 29, 2008

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    Awe

    This was Wonderful!! Yes, Wonderful with a capital 'W'!! Such emotion, you're so very true with your feelings. It's a beautiful piece, displaying so much love in so few of words. Just as love should be. Good to have you back.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 29, 2008
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    This is beautiful nice to see you wrting again


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 29, 2008

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    Ahhh this is very beautiful Thanks for sending the link
    Wonderful tribute to your love hope he enjoyed.


  • Arizona Sunset
    January 29, 2008
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    this is so beautiful honey, and you know I love your poems. your heart shines in this one. I know how much you love Randy. Your a treasure, and a beauty...I love you much always~ Momma

  • Climbing2nothing
    January 29, 2008

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    The end was a little sudden and maybe try tying in a few metaphors together might give it alittle more depth, yet the rest was magic flow, each line progressing in intensity the love combined to greatness especially within the breath,

    anyhows thanks for sharing this,
    w peaches and apricots -jas


  • callmekatiebug
    January 29, 2008
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    I can truly feel the love you have for him while reading this! Great write!


  • creationsfromheart
    January 29, 2008
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    looks wonderful:)


  • creationsfromheart
    January 29, 2008

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    The poem flows well and shows your love, I would suggest removing the capital Devine, as it stands out to much and makes it seem to be the most important part of the poem, and makes the other two stanzas seem less, But your words speak love...

  • Girlinred
    January 29, 2008

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    It seems you have a great deal of love for this person. It was nice, but I would really like more detail. The idea of joining and the powerful connection were very good.

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