... unrevealing,
passions spent like water
rivulets, streams and cascades
plaintiff song of remembrance,
to deafened world;
silent blue
spring flowers
rise upon grieved bones, pain;
life mattered more than
fleeting wealth and power.
World forges forgetful path,
'til searchful waking eyes
finding windows true
bountiful blue, more
each passing day.
A contest entry
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450 points, ended February 11, 2008, 13 entries
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thank you for the wonderful entry and good luck in the contest
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A beautiful piece of art you got here Mr. PK. Thank you for gracing my contest with your talent. Very well done.
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I love the feeling of remembrance you get when reading this poem. Keep writing!
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This is beautiful and powerful in the same breath, and it made me hold my breath from beginning to end...
Such a wonder this is
Lynda
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