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Slow Down

I stand sky high,
And watch everyone go bye.
To an outsider;
Day to day life seems obscure.
Everyday doing the same thing,
Then wishing for change.

They say time goes slowly,
I say it's wooshing by,
And never looking back.
I am me no matter what,
But I still long to go back.
Try and grow up differently.

I'm sick of growing up,
It makes me dizzy.
I don't want more responsibilities,
I just want to know I'm alive.
That I'm not just a part of time.

I want time to stop,
So I can catch my breath.
Everyone should just slow down,
Before they rush into death.

Author notes

This was just jotting down my feelings, it doesn't really have any style or flow but I needed to write something. I'm in my second last year of high school now and it's all gone by so fast. I don't know if I'm up to being a senior or graduating. I still feel so childish and everyone around me seems so mature now. I can't believe I'm already 15 and going to graduate in a year or so. Scary stuff.

Well I think it's bad, what do you think?

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  • Swintha
    February 3, 2008

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    "I want time to stop,
    So I can catch my breath.
    Everyone should just slow down,
    Before they rush into death."

    You move me, you really do.
    Ashy, i am also quite immature and childish, but thats ok, age has nothing to do with maturity. Just because you're a senior and graduating soon means you're growing up or have to grow up! Look at it as learning more and becoming more knowledgable. It's much easier to insult someone well when you have knowledge behind you! I can stay childish with you. And 15 isnt that old, im 16! Come talk to me, my small child

    -Swintha