We all tend to dwell on the past,
Always remembering how it was a blast.
Wishing that it would always last,
But some how it went by so fast.
But now we are living in the present.
And I'll always remeber the time we spent.
And you will always be my best friend,
Always hoping all the way to the end.
Author notes
This is to my best friend. I LOVE YOU MISHMACA!
A contest entry
- Pre Written Rhyme by piccola.
900 points, ended February 5, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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A lovely dedication, best of luck with it
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Nice tribute to someone you care about. The rhyme is a bit forced as though you put words in just for the sake of rhyming so it doesn't sound quite natural though. It is cute and has the ring of truth...how we look into the past and wonder where the time went. Thank you for this entry.
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