climbing roses fade
all petals have blown away
stealth rose grows trip wire.
Author notes
this is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Summers end it would seem as the last of the rose dwindle. Good ima gery,form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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Nice 1
I liked this so much that I will applaud it because well its just a very well penned poem. keep up the nice work and good luck with the contest
sorry it was a bad comment I just wrote what I thought But finishing my comment loved the imagery you placed into the poem and also the over all picture behind the Haiku
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