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liberty

back when it was our time to shine
we needed no excuses

folks thought it was normal
but that they would never find.

  they covet all our muses



to rhyme, such as us
our crime ? others fuss !
NV-ous minds, cursed in dust
we are blind while others just ?



to walk across the road to be with you
obstructions plenty, challenge through and through
I mark the spot; I shall return some day
the trickery the serve: do not obey



obey it not for you are free
to live your life in liberty
and trust in 'us' for all will see
than human-KIND is meant to be !



.n.v.

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  • Natasha Bradich
    January 31, 2008

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    Im in love

    with this write ...I could almost sing it ... i felt every word ... i liked walking inthose shoes too!