soft wind, rustle its
night linger, peeking half moon
cat scurry behind
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into gold (or silver or bronze) #6 by whispernthedark.
700 points, ended September 27, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love that peek, it is so flirty. Great write, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Kendhal22
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wonderful images emerge in your Haiku, good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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thank u
thank u for the wonderful critique given to my ku. Kendhal22
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I liked this poem of yours. it has such a ncie subtle aura to it that really makes this flows so beautifully and also makes this a very nice poem. any ways your Haiku really hits the heart nice and hard and it also really stimulates ones self of wonderment and well thats hard to explain but it did. any ways a wonderfully penned Haiku and keep up the good work n good luck
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