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Twenty is a sad Number

Twenty things to do before I die
Twenty thousand times I try
Twenty broken dreams
Twenty times over it seems
See foreign land
But they were burnt by foreign hand
Become rich and wealthy
Yet  Greed makes me unhealthy
Two from twenty yet unfulfilled
What dreams of mine yet unkilled?
To shake hands with power
Trod under foot like a flower
Time is ticking by
What a demon, sly
Twenty things to do before i die

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I like this one, i dont know why

Yay ^^

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  • doyouloveit
    March 27, 2008
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    and twenty is a sad number that is true

  • doyouloveit
    March 27, 2008

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    I LOVE IT, I DO!

    I think you have written a masterpiece here!! this is witty creative and full of talent and lets me know your imagination is HUGE and that is always GOOD