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Covered Up In Lies

Empty space
Dark and frightening
Locked inside
Alone and screaming

But no one could hear a sound
Everything's covered up in lies
When underneath are hidden cries

Permenit scares
Fadeless and deep
Covered up
Under her sleaves

But no one should see a thing
Everything's covered up in lies
When underneath are hidden cries

Ghost of her past
The haunting memories
Suicidal thoughs
From her secret dreams

But no one would know a thing
Everything's covered up in lies
When underneath are hidden cries



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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 12, 2008

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    G'Day emogirl1127

    Strongly expressed again; you wear the cloak of darkness well.
    I am in love with the final stanza it really reaches deep into the readers heart.

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    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

  • Flamecaster
    January 29, 2008
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    omg...what an outstanding poem...hope you win ...and may God bless you....


  • Justmenow
    January 29, 2008

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    wow

    this is such a good poem, it really reaches out to me and i feel i can associate with it, keep up the good work

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