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Once

Just a panoramic view
Of what I dont want to see

I tried bleeding
once
'cause I couldnt hold it all

I tried feeling
once
again
but now im lost

I crying
once
twice
again
But it stung too much

I tried knowing
First
twice
again
last
Just so I could try Bleeding

hm

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  • Raining Moon
    April 1, 2008
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    Cool

    It sounds a little Emoish. =P

  • tgirl
    March 30, 2008
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    I love your background

    Your poem is deep but has point