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Twilight and candles

Twilight and candles
one more prawn in the barby
warm friends and cool wine

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 20, 2008

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    Thank you for the warm wonderful imagery. Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 16, 2008

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    Very Nice

    this has such a soft subtle feeling to your poem that it really hits home when you palce your mind into this haiku of yours. I like the over all feeling you give us from this and also the over all quality of the sheer brilliance you give. any ways nice work and keep it up