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Meadow

You can hear the sound of soft breathing
you can see a girl sleeping,
and a boy with her

He sits with her,
she mumbles something in her sleep
The boy begins to sing a soft song
The girl again goes in a peaceful sleep

When the girl awakes she is glad that the boy is there
He says that, they should go to there meadow
When they go she sits with him all the way

Here they sit, together in their meadow
They sit and remember everything
all the times they spent together

They know there is more to come
But are they ready?
They just found each other again
Will their love be enough?

What will happen in the future?

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  • VampyEyes
    March 7, 2008
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    wtf... meadows scare me


  • Sticks-And-Stones
    February 1, 2008
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    Great job! I really like this poem. Thanks for entering!


  • lemonhead
    January 29, 2008
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    YAYAY GREAT JOB ITS BETTER THAN MINE... I HOPE YOU WIN!!! I love their meadow....


  • Innocent Evil
    January 29, 2008
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    hehe i saw your write this poem good job, are ya going to enter the Twilight contest thing...


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Cuuuuuuuuute.
    Spent together, not sent together.
    But still, awwwwwwww........
    CUUUUUUUUUTE!!!!


  • GlowstickOfLove
    January 29, 2008
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    awwwww


  • Sle3p
    January 29, 2008
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    this sorta relates to me and drew *hides* meehhh interesting topic....c u at school

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