Being me..
What can I say?
Being me feels warm,
Yet, icy cold.
It feels fresh and new,
But so dim and old.
Being me I feel confident,
But also so unsure,
I can be really geeky,
Or filled with pure allure.
Being me feels radiant,
And yet, so pallid.
I can feel very achromatic,
But also really very ecstatic.
Being me...
What can I say?
Author notes
I will fix later....I know the rhyming is a little off
A contest entry
- For the kids 13 and under: HOW DOES IT FEEL TO BE YOU? by Sky Prince Ireland.
600 points, ended February 2, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so?
Comments
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Good job on this poem Kathryn..very nice. Yes I agree the rhyming is a bit off, but so is mine all the time, so if I were you I'd keep it that way. Although I'm not you and I don't know what it's like to be you so don't take this from me.
Good job on this though!
peace.
*KT*
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I don't expect entries to rhyme but if you feel you should make that change, it's up to you. I appreciate your entry; nicely done. Good luck to you.
Brian
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