True feelings shared without one word
By touch are volumes said
We dance together in this life
As birds with wings outspread
Two souls that circle ‘round one light
Like moths drawn to a flame
Our heart’s desire pulls on us
And nothing is the same
With nature’s laws at full abreast
Our blood is flowing wild
We stand as one for all to see
The fear of love defiled
The waves of passion keep us close
We’re drifting on the sea
Though storms may come and storms may go
You’ll still belong with me
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 10 The Grand FINALE 5000+ Points! by cricketjeff.
5000 points, ended February 12, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your beautiful poem of love that was a joy to read and thank you so much for being with us throughout our series of contests, we hope you have enjoyed them as much as we have.
Please join us in any future contests we may run.
All the best
Sue and Jeff
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What a beautiful picture of love and loyalty. I enjoyed reading it. I like the rhythm and the rhyme.
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I'm a sucker for love poems and this one with it's rhyme and meter flowed directly into my heart. Well done!
Love,
Amera♥
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Lovely!
Your words and rhythm flow beautifully in this. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
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Dear Ruth once again it is my joy to read your words.I believe you have a wonderful grasp of rhyme that always makes reading your work such a joy Thank you good luck in the contest
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