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Ghosts

So whole and free of troubles, envied by everyone
They cannot see the darkness hiding behind the light
They do not know the secrets just past the edge of sight

Were they to place a prism betwixt the child and them
The broken world revealed would make them think again
Ghosts and demons shaped a fractured soul of splintered lies

TO BE CONTINUED

Author notes

Across The Universe (The Beatles)
2. Images of broken light which dance before me like a million eyes,
they call me on and on across the universe.

JP.Troy

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  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 31, 2008

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    I love ghost poems! This is great.
    Best lines:
    "Were they to place a prism betwixt the child and them
    The broken world revealed would make them think again"