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Bleed

Everyone does it right?
Well not me.
I feel outside.
I feel unique.
I feel nothing!
Am I special?
No not me.
I can't express.
I can't tell.
I can't bleed!
You think I'm lying?
Nah, not me.
I do tell the truth.
I do want you to listen.
I do bleed!
I just did it huh?
Yep, me.

Author notes

Wrote this while I was in the school library with nothing to do. Just a different way to express myself I guess. Made me feel better.

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  • Who Has Dreamed It
    January 29, 2008

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    Excellent!

    I like this... it vaguely reminds me of the song "Creep" by radiohead. i really like your other poems, too