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Traffic in a Parking Lot

It's the small things
That catch me by surprise
Like traffic in a parking lot
Or falling in your eyes

Like a penny on the street
With the date of my birth
Two voids of topaz
Like nothing on earth

I'm not afraid to fall
I know I'll be protected
By those two beige orbs
Completely unexpected

If your hand is empty
You can borrow mine
And if your eyes loose color
I'll help to make them shine

It's the small things
That catch me by surprise
Like traffic in a parking lot
Or falling in your eyes




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  • hidingintheshadows9
    February 10, 2008

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    awwwwwwwww that is so sweet is this about who i think its about? It was awesome keep up the great work