Doo-da, da-da-da
Fa-la-la... la-la
The music keeps on playing.
I try _hard_ to ignore it.
Turn my head around,
Imagine a different life.
Reality... is not so sweet,
When you get down to it.
I just can't do it.
Let me remain a prisoner to my imagination.
Face... what I fear to face.
Since yesterday, to this day.
It will take time.
I got to face...
FACE THE MUSIC.
Don't try to ignore,
The bare reality.
=\
Author notes
i jsut all came out, ill edit it later.... jus tell me what you think bout it?
w/e
Comments
1 - 12 of 12
-
Reality is raw and not always a pleasant place to be. I think that there are many who can relate to this poem because of that very fact. for me its always been a hard thing to do, escape to my imagination, because truth to be told, I was more afraid of a fairy tale world, than reality. because reality for me is concrete, harsh, bitter and cold. I've never been comfortable with anything else.. but lately I wouldn't mind just a small escape from it every once in awhile.. but knowing that eventually I have to come back as you say "Face The Music"... I think I'll just hold off a little longer.
Congratulations on the spotlight.. I really think that this poem is Brilliant and carries a strong message
kat
-
:]
-
hummm.... well I do understand where this is coming from. I too have had a time in my life where reality was a difficult thing for me. I wanted to be somewhere anywhere but in my reality. Good write.
-
Tru Dat
Can't turn your back
Cuz life ain't like that
Do Dah diddy wah do.
-
A really great write! Thank you for sharing this!
-
it's a good one
im impressed man you are the best y'knw? keep it up! -
you nailed it! this is just awesome to read and it slipped off my tongue like spit. awesome awesome job!
-
This is cool!
'Reality... is not so sweet,
When you get down to it.'
My favorite lines. Anyway, this is great! -
wehey
good write.
Let me remain a prisoner to my imagination.
thats a good line. if this is your first draft.
little improvement's need be made.
-
Whooot!! Very well done, and said. I could hear music in the background almost when I was reading this. I liked it a lot.
-
Yeah, a good start. I think you could explore this idea a little more. Thanks for sharing!
-
I like the unqiue flow of this and imagery; great for a 12 year old
.♥.
Stay safe
~Manda
(\__/)
(='.'=) ♥
(")_(")
Adding your comment:
1 - 12 of 12
