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It still hurts

It still hurts to Know you're gone
It's painful not to have you
It's so much different
When You are here
But much more lonely
When you're not
If only I saw
You at your worst,
It wouldn't matter to me,
For it does get better.
It only you knew
That it hurts
More that you thought
You would see
That it's much more painful
Thank you thought...

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  • nightsky lover
    February 3, 2008
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    nicely written..
    keep the good work goin up..
    :-)


  • Candy6
    January 28, 2008
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    Greatly expressed. This poem is 1 thumbs up!