as i turned up the radio to listen to our song
i came to realize i missed you all along
and while my heart is breaking
your life's been taken, away
i can picture this scene in my head
in cold black blood with a gun on your bed
the screams of shells against the sun
now it doesn't matter, which side has won
and i've lost all fate that you'd come home to me
the last thing i said, the last you got to see
i didn't know i still loved you and i shut you out
could you have given me another chance
had you come back for one last dance
you wanted to sing for the world
you wanted to stay with your little girl
talent never realized
and now the grave conceals your eyes
i told you before your were gone
following destiny is wrong
i don't blame you for leaving me there
but i wish you could see how much i care
as i turned up the radio to listen to our song
i came to realize that you were gone
any good?
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You write of this so raw and pure, it tears at me. The sense of lost and being in pain is so very real, the way poetry should be, you have expressed how your heart feels and it hurts even mine
C
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Realization and acceptance
are never easy and often painful, but they are essential to understanding and cognizance of the raw truths of life.
You can never go back and undo what is done, so do your best the first time, and keep in mind that second chances in life are extremely rare.
Keep writing, and keep looking for the truth.
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