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Just Be

To stand outside

in pouring rain
holding your hands up,

(palms upturned),
tilt your face towards the sky,
and laugh.

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  • Naridill
    February 1, 2008

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    Very beautiful inspiration - one I have indulged in plenty of times lovely piece here.

    Thanks for entering,


  • SignifyingNothing
    January 31, 2008

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    This is a nice little poem. It really captures a moment of joy and innocence. I think of a child in the rain, having a fun time while all the adults trudge by with their umbrellas, afraid to get just a little bit wet. Really well done!


  • suseann
    January 29, 2008

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    This piece demonstrates the sheer joys of enjoyed life and natures gifts well.Seeking the essence of the powers that be,touching it with palms capturing it,yet allowing it freedom to reign/rain. Ha! I adore this well versed piece.