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Sea of Words

Words are all I have
Spinning inside of me
Swirling like the currents
Of a fury, storm-tossed sea

My lips, they are the earthen banks
Which hold the flood at bay
A breach means Hellish, never-ending
Regret for what I say

But this shell can only hold so much
The ocean song will never fit inside
So, with tapping keys and scrawling pens,
I send forth the endless tide

Hopes and dreams and painful tears
Unfurl sails and float away
Towards some distant shore unseen
Where they may be heard some day

Author notes

Across The Universe (The Beatles)
1. Words are flowing out like endless rain into a paper cup, they slither wildly as they slip away across the universe.

JP.Troy

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  • Tarja
    January 30, 2008

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    I love this! You totally blow the Beatles out of the water! The rhyming and the imagery were gorgeous. And I have a passion for the seam so obviously it was easy for me to enjoy this. Well done. Good luck.


  • Morrigan Trinity
    January 28, 2008

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    Fill it in so I can comment. I know you have good work.