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Not finished

If there ever was a way
Of making you see
Just how distant and different
You now feel to me

Will there ever be a way
Of opening up your eyes?
The spark is rapidly fading
Though this may come to you as a surprise

I wish I knew how to talk to you
I wish the right words I could find
Is there something I can do
To ease my cloud filled mind

I'm afraid the damage is already done
Afraid the blow will be too severe
Afraid when I try to explain
You're not going to want to hear

Afraid that like glass
Our relationship will shatter
What am I suppose to say?
Like anything is going to matter

Why couldn't you have listened to me
Why did you have to take me for granted
I know I wasn't perfect
I know I went on and ranted

But the things I tried to tell you
We're truely important to me
What I would have given
For you to take me seriously





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Not finished just something I had to get out

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  • Andi. gold member
    May 10
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    another fab poem. sad but well written


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    January 28, 2008

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    Strongly expressed Mara, I hope things work out for you.

    .♥.
    Stay safe
    ~Manda