If words were as bitter as you,
I suppose my tongue would sting,
With every other word I spoke,
(I´ve got plenty of rage, left to sing)
And if words were as bitter as you,
I´d let It eat me alive, inside,
There would be nothing better to do...
But words are not as bitter,
And the air is not as heavy in my lungs,
As it is in those of the sad,
And I won´t lie, and tell you,
That I´d like to know how things got so bad...
But beyond that visage,
Desolate eyes scrolling,
Heart sinking,
As mind keeps rolling,
Ever in search of answers...
One must blame one´s self for one´s disposition...
Tear filled eyes, every night, seems like a personal mission,
There is a light within every dark room,
Though you may not see it,
There is always a friend who does.
Author notes
I don´t know exactly which genre this should fall under, and I don´t even know if it was worth the time you wasted reading it, but if it was, then you should probably be looking fro a good friend to talk to about it all right now.....
In a list
A contest entry
- If words were as bitter as you. by Naridill.
450 points, ended January 28, 2008, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Its not about the way you read it but what you get out of it. I understand this feeling and the way you express it, I am feeling a thousand things as anger and remorse but a fury in the heart that could not burn away. As if even though its done, even though its over there is always a way out. A situation is never as hopeless as it seems.
~Dragonia~
-
Thanx for writing this. I just had a fight with the guy I love b/c he won't take me back even though he loves me, and it's a long story. But thank you for writing this, It's just what I needed to hear.
-
Hey this is good! I like it, though it is sad its very good. Nice work!
-
Thank you
Adding your comment:
