Wicked thoughts have invaded my heart
and I feel
the endless
echos of laughter
mocking my forgotten lies
and tortured memories of a life lost
to angered fingers
and thoughtless smiles
stabbing into my very being of hope
taken swiftly from loving hands
Forbidden to weep
and taunted to parade around
in others shallow waters
Igniting nothing
as though I am not.
Tip toe through vast deserts
as blisters boil
and grow throughout the insides
of my wanderer.
Wicked thoughts taint my colors in fear
Weep not for me
I weep enough inside my dark laughter.
A contest entry
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Comments
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this is really good,
i love the form its written in and the theme,
and pain of the poem,
good luck,
*leaves a rose*
Elektra xxx -
you are DQ for breaking my line limit i have been quite flexible in this contest,
"I weep enough
inside
my
dark
laughter." i love this line its brilliant well done this has alot of potential -
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Another Chance?
I have revised it, if you could let me un DQ me????
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Awesome poem
Dark and riveting poem. Good luck in contest.
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I like the piece, the emotion is strong. I'm not too keen on the format. I think perhpas more in a stanza form it would make more of an impact. But just my thoughts
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This is a great read, very chilling. Good luck
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wow
This was excellent!I love this!it made me want to write and that's what I'm looking for!Excellent write!I like this line 'stabbing into my very being of hope'
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