Bird on autumn wood
made it a nest to the brood
springing hopeful life
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"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderful imagery, seen so clearly and with hope of spring here soon! Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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Love it!!!
Oh I am such a sucker for some bird haikus like this one and this really brought a warmth to my heart as I instantly thought of how bautiful the warmth of the spring sun is as the brood hatches from its protective sheel and tweets its first birdy breathe on a nice little bird life it'll have. any ways just stunning visualization through out this haiku and just a very impressive one. keep up the good work and good luck this should be a contender for a win
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lovely and life affirming image and a beautiful and scenic take on the picture
best of luck to you also
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