from the backyard trees
dead leaves form an underlay
for winter snowfall
Author notes
This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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I can see this so clearly as my yard fills with leaves before the great snowfall each year. Thank you for your entry, good from and counts. Ken IBT
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Beautiful
really loved the wionter like scene you created here with your poem and also really loved the way your words flow from line to line. also very much enjoyed how your Haiku just moved me in such a soft way that it really was music to my ears. any ways a well penned nice job and keep up the good work n good luck
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