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true love

True love comes from the heart, in all sizes, or colour. matters not to anyone.

True love is a blessed feeling that everyone should be able to feel, understand, and to have

It heals the heart, mind, and soul when nothing less can do

True love isn't about sex, touching and appearance. What it's about is being a friend to your lover, knowing when their hurting and how to make them feel better.

It's also respecting their wishes and not pushing them into something they can't or won't do. True love is a powerful drug that intoxicates the mind like no other and never leaves.

True love,
        Understand yourself and feel the true power of the heart

Author notes

To you who do not know me, this represents for all couples including my girlfriend. my writings, always involve more than one person it's intended for

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  • ParadiseSeeker
    March 3, 2008

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    simply amazing

    ...i don't believe i've ever met a man quite like you. through your poetry you express the wisdom of a much older man, and you hold beliefs about love that strongly ecco my own...whoever you love will be the luckiest person out there to have someone like you. you truly are a wonderful soul


  • Jalalbad gold member
    February 5, 2008
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    Great write. Your words are touching and sweet food for the heart.


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 3, 2008
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    This works in this contest as it did not in the other, but if you read the rules carefully in the other one you would know why(lol). I think it is a great Valentine for your girl and for couples. I want to thank you for entering my "Valentine's Day for AP Members" contest.

    Ted E


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Well I think you are very mature for the young of your age to be able to write such wonderful words about love
    I have enjoyed reading you
    Nicely done
    Nick


  • pandapattinson9
    January 30, 2008
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    Thank you for having the guts to say that. Not many people can actually write something and make me think twice about how I feel but you are able to. It gives me the idea that if I try hard enough I can find that one special person who will be my true love without having to force it.


  • im only half empty
    January 29, 2008

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    This is so true.

    A lot better on the repativeness. There still isn't much of a structure, but other than that great job.


  • tjj
    January 29, 2008
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    i agree totaly


  • Athronofaredrose
    January 28, 2008
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    Wow after reading this I got tingles all over my body.

    Great poem, and very true. Great joba and keep it up


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    January 28, 2008
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    I agree with much about what you have said about "True Love." However, it didn't strike me as a Valentine to yours truly. Thanks for trying your best and I do wish you a very Happy Valentine's Day! I want to thank you for entering my "Valentine's for APs Ted E Bare" contest.

    Ted E

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