Glist'ning blanket white
Cuddles o'er the garden Spot
Nurturing the soil.
Author notes
"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
Photo: An actual picture I took of my back yard.
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
point out misspellings or things I can improve upon in a kind and friendly way--THANKS!
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Thank you for your Haiku, good imagery, form and counts. Best wishes, Ken IBT
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My good friend this is quite a beautiful picture you have taken of your backyard and I have to say I wouldn't mind seeing how it looks when it is summer time any ways with that beings aid I love how you took this Haiku and made it into a beautiful winter Haiku because well living where you live at it is crazy how much white blankets your area every season. any ways a well penned Haiku that was very enjoyable to read. keep up the good work n good luck -
Great thought here!
Lovely take on this picture.
Well done and good luck to you
with it here!
Jeremy0826 -
All the best
Oh! a nice backyard, for 'highlighting' a beautifulhaiku
thank you
all the best -
Very nice Haiku I You did the picture well. Good luck with this beautiful piece in the contest.
Cara
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