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I Love My Egg

It's funny how you love her,
That you kiss her shell.
And whisper sugarcoated lies into her case,
Funny how it secures her,
In your able bodied strength.
It's funny, how you look at her,
Dancing eyes that twinkle within the sunlight.
Appraising your property with the finest glance.
Funny how you look through her,
And stare at the reflection of her armor.
It's funny how you touch her,
Like precious gold that glitters.
With all the falseness,
Of the fools that sift for it.
Funny, how you graze her casing with fickle fingertips,
That grasp for some form of truth.
Funny, how you love her,
With the tainted lips and evaluating eyes.
Funny how you stroke her sheild,
With the same gripping fingertips.
It's funny, that I love my egg.

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  • whits end silver member
    June 2, 2008

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    BRAVO

    This seems very metaphoric to me. It is clever, serious, yet at the end a little comical.
    BRAVO!


  • Clinging-to-Life
    January 30, 2008

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    aww. if I didn't know better I would think this write was in relation to a baby...maybe it is. But I love how you wrote this. Great write.


  • Tam
    January 30, 2008

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    oh dear...

    how in the world you found this sweet write with that egg picture is asonishing! LOL
    I adore this write...and I see the honoree did too...
    how sweet is this?
    you rock lady!
    I love the repeating lines of: Funny how...
    great job...this reads like gold to me...
    Blessings! Tammy


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    January 28, 2008
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    Awe too sweeeeeettttt U love ur eggy!


  • Rejected Easter Egg
    January 28, 2008

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    gosh you really know how to turn a girls shell pink

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