What is in this pumpkin's womb?
a glimpse into the most revered
A Cinderella doll
with repetitious walls
and a one way view?
She’s a broken heart
in candied and mechanical shapes
Thus, Cinderella
with painted red plastic
offers us a simple taste
A taste of what is most desired
Author notes
11 lines. The picture looks like a pumpkin's womb...
A contest entry
- Ray Caesar - digital art inspiration #44 by leander.
400 points, ended February 8, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me a critical thought.
Comments
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I actually never really looked at the image as if it was a pumpkin's womb
great catch on that, and a wonderful metaphor as well actually
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander -
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thank you for the comment and for the silver. I am honored. You always have such great contests and it was a pleasure just to enter. please, keep them coming. Cheers.
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