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beautiful flowers
intermingled with the weeds
washing on the line
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"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."
A contest entry
- Haiku by InBetweenThoughts; all welcome by InBetweenThoughts.
600 points, ended February 21, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for the visions through your eyes. Sounds like my garden if I let it lasp to long
Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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Very Nice
I loved the flowing rhythm like beat through out this poem and also liked the in depth detail you place dinto this Haiku via merley mentioning hanging laundry from the clothesline outside and also how the beautiful flowers are stuck intermixed with weeds that smuther your backyard. any ways just a very well penned Nature Haiku and keep up the good work n good luck -
oh so pretty! even some weeds aren't that ugly
i let them mingle in my yard, well, sometimes beautiful haiku...
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Great Haiku.
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Lovely piece you have written here.
Great imagery and well thought out.
Good luck to you with it and thanks
for sharing it here!
Jeremy0826 -
I really like this Haiku... its great imagery! Well done and thank you for sharing
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