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Fall-ing

Leaves litter the ground
Sharp hues of color engage
The trees recycle

Author notes

"This is a great form of poetry
that flows from my thoughts,
though the picture I see is greater,
I have summed it all up beautifully in such short verse."

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  • InBetweenThoughts
    February 20, 2008

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    A wonderful entry, lovely images brought forth within. Good form and counts. Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    February 16, 2008

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    Wow

    I read one of my favorite poets Haikku's about winter in this cotnest name is Ryno good guy who is a young poet but any ways he mastered it about winter and that reaslly made an impact upon me. Now running across your poemn here and the way you talk about Autumn is just very impressive and your depth flow and imagery placed into this poem is just incredible. keep up the very good work and good luck


  • Dutch Doll
    February 5, 2008

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    Brings a nice vision of autumn my yard is full of leaves and i love watching my kids prance through them so i don't bother cleaning them up till spring

    very nice work