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Suicidal For You

With tears in my eyes & blood running down my wrists,

A drop of blood for every girl you kissed.

In my eyes I can see your face,

And lying on the ground is a broken vase.

How could you do me so wrong,

I can't believe I even fell for your love song!

With every breath I take I can feel the pain,

Living it over again & again.

I guess this is where I lie,

With no where to go, just broken inside.

I remember thinking we were better apart,

I just wish I knew this from the start.

Now I can't go on like this,

'Cause all I do is bleed when I think of you two kiss.

So now I'm just going to end it right here,

Just do one thing and listen to this, my dear.

With tears in my eyes & blood running down my wrists,

One last time, I jabbed it in there & gave it a twist.

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  • sonata
    January 29, 2008

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    so sad. i like it. the rhythm was different then most poems though it could have worked better. it was interesting to read.