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Scream

Anguished sighs
enslave dreamers.
Phantom cries
without voices
penetrate souls.

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For CJ's contest.

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  • ImJay
    January 28, 2008

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    Congrats on the Silver in the contest, this was a very beautifully deep poem, i enjoyed it very much! -Jay

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    Very nice take on the prompt thank you for your entry into my contest best wishes and much luck


  • Kari gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    This one sort of reminds me of a song or something..it's very well done and I like the emotions felt in it. Best of luck in the contest


  • Naridill
    January 28, 2008

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    Nicely worded - this take on prompt was simple but stunning. Nice play on words - very effective.


  • Anguas-Confusion gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    Another dark take on the prompt. Very well written however and it's air is given to it by the background, very well done. best of luck in the contest. xxx


  • broken-colours
    January 28, 2008

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    WOW

    This poem is majorly impressive. You've done so much with ten words, the reader probably wouldn't guess you had a limit if you didn't tell them. Fantastic! I'm lost for words right now. Best of luck to you in the contest, even though you certainly don't need it.

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