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Not even close [Savanna]

i'm not even close,
to what you see,
not pretty as a rose,
nore perfect as the gental sea,

i want to be an angel,
pretty as can be,
with wings of debis,[dUH-BreE]
and still able to be looked at in awe,
wrists are raw,
cuts and scars,
such damage made by a friend,
only who i can depend,

i want to be a bird,
soring the sky,
no worried but to keep dry,
blue feathers,
pretty as can be,
but still not enough,

wish to be flower,
petals so soft,
such a sent to waft,
delicious,
of them all,
victorious,


but thats not me,
not at all,
cant be,
wont be,
never could be,
just the ugly me,
who i will always will be,

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im NOT pretty...

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  • Dee-Razberry
    January 28, 2008
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    Don't Think That Way!

    I HATE this poem because I hate how you see yourself this way. You may see yourself this way but I sure as hell don't. I despertly want you ro see you how I see you. To me you are the most colorful bird, the most enchanting lily, the most worshipped god!