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the smoke

when those folks
come to town
they just stumble
up and down
instant pleasure
is their goal
so they drink
until they fall

have no time
to chose the shirt
think it's fine
down to earth

gloomy sights
know their rights
most of all
to piss the wall

and isn't it nice
to stop smoking
again and again?

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