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Delicate Worlds

Birdnests cupped in palms;

every papery shell holds new wonder.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

First prompt.

In a list

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

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  • Friday gold member
    January 28

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    Makes me feel like I ate rainbows.


  • And Hyetal
    January 28

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    Not crap. Say that one more time and I'll have my white gangster friend come after you.








    And see, you even got a bronze out of it! I love this poem... It's so cute and delicate and there's so much imagery in such a short poem.

    Great job!

    ~Cassie


  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    January 28

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    Wonderful work here!
    Good luck to you with
    this one in the contest!



    Poet4You

  • Midnight-x-Rose silver member
    January 28

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    Excuse me, you got crap? What writing, or prompt . I liked this. It was different to all the other forms of the prompt.

  • Kiddy
    January 28
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    This is nice...


  • Naridill gold member
    January 28
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    w00t~!

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