If I was to scream out you name,
Do you think you would hear?
If I missed you so much,
Would you miss me too?
If I could hug you,
Would you hug me back?
If I kissed you,
Would you kiss my lips, too?
When think about you,
Do you think of me, too?
If I yell for freedom,
Would you let my chains loose?
If I explored your mouth,
Would you seek out mine?
When I breathe,
Does it take your breath away?
If I closed my eyes,
Will I dream Of you?
When I think about Marriage,
Would it be with you?
If the ring on my finger is from you,
Is it because our love is true?
Comments
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Humm..the inquiries are very beautifully woven through the thoughtful speed and intruging questions as well..I loved the pace and tone of the questions..this is just a heartfelt write..well done...
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what a stunning poem
that brings about a lot of life changing decisions to the forefront of one's mind
terrific piece
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wowza!!!
wow grlee this is really awsum and powerfull!!! u did an awsum job!!! i <3 it!!!!
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