It was when
The morningsun B U R S T
Over the T that he
u A
O I s
M N
real izedhow the
colorscolliedinthesky
To turn the morn ingrays
in to something
a
m
a
z
i
n
g,
Like the way Her
Skinflushed at the mrere thought
of l o v e,
or the B R I GHT yellow coloring of the dress she wore,
Whse shade matched only that of her
Golden Locks.
Author notes
so this is supposed to be in a style similar to that of e.e. cummings, so yes, it has broken up words, and words running into each other and it may look a little weird, and the grammar may not be right, but it's supposed to be that way
Please tell me what you think
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not really his style tho
do more with punctuation
and dont try to make it look cool
cummings's style is all shaped for a distinct purpose
'cept the ones where he just threw a shitload of punctuation marks on the page
those were just to be badass
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