when love of another takes over
when no other thought enters in
when life as we know it ends
what do we do?
when hiding it becomes impossible
when not knowing what to do begins
when fear takes over every thought
what do we do?
when it hurts to even look at you
when it hurts to even hug you
when it hurts to even love you
what do we do?
what can we do to fix what cant be fixed
Author notes
this is my life right now. something happend that shouldnt have and now im paying for it, and will be for 18 years.
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Comments
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A very nicely done poem indeed! But so very, very sad!! (I don't think I understand the author's note however.)
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Oh shame, sorry about the mistake, we all make them sometimes.. I think I know what it is, but I don´t want to be all nosy about something thats not really my business.. About the piece, I really liked it a lot! It shouws a lot of feeling in a not too overdetailed way.. Brilliant.. Thanks for entering, I apreciate it =] Bravo and Good Luck!
<3 Lifes Sorrow
P.S. Everythings gonna be fine, dont worry...
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