Your heart and soul feel dirty,
a great need to cleanse yourself.
A spiritual feeling imprinted,
hard within mind and body.
Following your carnal instincts,
you are pulled as if by a string.
Solid firm proof points you to,
the waters of Precious Song lake.
Reaching the water, stepping in,
to purify your fleshly spirit.
Dipping in and drinking from Precious,
droplets raining down into your soul.
Finally you have drank your fill,
sated by the warm refreshing waters.
You walk away tasting the sweet essence,
with the promise to return again and again.
A contest entry
- Water! by mmistermeh.
700 points, ended February 18, 2008, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
This is wonderfully sensual Rain.
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=) great poem, thank you for your wonderful entry!
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Beautiful!! This was soft and senual. Made me want to find those refreshing waters and float in them!
Great write!
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Loved the imagery here, and the feel of a healing source. I love the water, it refreshes my spirit. Your poetry has done that for me today. Beautiful! I feel a great serenity after reading this. I thank you for that! The best to you in the contest.
Much Love & Respect ♥
Renee
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Nice imagery the power of water the many properties and it is essential for life.I feel this cleansing far reaching as i leave your lines the promise of returning lingers in my thoughts. Nicely penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Refreshing, I feel the water cascading down your body. dripping slowly from you. Cleaning, cleansing your thoughts and passion. ~ Nice one darling.
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Stunning words you have penned here
lil sister
loved the imagery in this. Great job and good luck in the contest. Thankyou so much for sharing.
ephiphany♥
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Girl this totally awesome for the words tell a beautiful love story of passion, fullfillment and that special someone. The precious moments spent within the lake of love. I adore the picture....excellent write. Write on!..... Mom
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