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bash out my falling heart
  take 10ten10tenten10
(ten pills) and eat my insides a p a r t
  sip the pond scum
hiding beneath your fingernails
sing along to this song
    shouts and wails
    kiss my rusty chapped lips
no one hears you anyhow
so scream the fuck aloud,
  in place of the innocence
I never had
 

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  • stylization
    March 4, 2008

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    that was powerful. the 10ten10... was interesting and worked well, and same with "a p a r t"
    in place of the innocence
    i never had

    my favorite lines
    a great write!