I owe you...
my sanity
After all those years past,
you still offer your heart
I owe you...
my love
You always supported me
always helped me
always held my weight
and never buckled
You read my pain like a tattered book
You flattened my pages
You helped me find my place
My place is with you
returning what help & compassion
you gave me
I owe you...
sturdyness
I owe you...
a shelf of your own
Author notes
I wrote this for a school extra credit assignment. we were supposed to think of a person and then look around her room and pick a random object and compare the two. Im having trouble thinking of a title...
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Comments
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^_^ your work is impressive
I know that I'm impressed
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this is cute. i like the last lines. and the repeated "i owe you..." good structure. thanks for entering.
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I know, someone I owe for sticking by me too, and it's really nice to have someone who was willing to be there when others turned their back.
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this was a great poem.
i loved how you compared.
thanks for entering.
good luck.
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this is really good,i like the comparison
always held my weight
and never buckled
I owe you...
a shelf of your own
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like I said... I like yours better. but thats just me!
and it has be with something "you, ...." and to deal with strength. Iono...
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Strength
how about the title- "You, My Fortitude"
i changed it to that anyway..so it will have to do, at least for now.... -
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I like it.. for now, like you said. lol
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