One but one love that tells me I am the one
I am the one to hold your hands
And to share all my happiness hand in hand
Where diamonds fade before your sparkling face.
Let the moon to dance with us
To make an evidence of our love
Let the moonlit earth rejoice your agreement;
Let the whole world go stunned
That you have touched my hand!!
Let the trumpet shout with us
Come what may, no MahaRaja
Nothing to pretend, or to perform
Any foul.
Here, you lay your shoulder covered with
My love as a protecting shawl.
Let the angels be our guidance
Come what may
I have signed my soul to thee.
Author notes
"Moulin Rouge" A Pure Love Story. Inspired by it.
A contest entry
- Moulin Rouge by nonya.
650 points, ended February 4, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want a lot of poems... by love my jose luis.
900 points, ended February 21, 2008, 125 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Whatever You May Desire by InMyFlames.
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Comments
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nice poem i love the last stanza it really finished it
'Let the angels be our guidance
Come what may
I have signed my soul to thee'
great job... and thanks for entering -
I can see the resembalnce from Moulin Rouge... One of my favorite movies to tell you the truth. I actually did a color guard show to that music my freshman year of high school. Great write and good luck in my contest.
~Maria -
Thanks a lot for the silver.
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This is very deep. I love the flow of the poem. The words fit in a weird but perfect way.
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