Purest pillows
we touch in our dreams
when heaven weaves
its spiritual carpet
within our souls.
Lifted by divine wind
beyond shadows,
to soar serenely
on back
of angel's wings.
A contest entry
- 30 words or less/20 entries...Inspirational by mysticstorm.
600 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes. by Perfectly Imperfect.
300 points, ended February 12, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful. Short but effective, lovely imagery Well done and thank you for entering x
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Such beautiful soft flow and peaceful feeling in your words...imagery is so inviting...nicely done.
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Well done on this piece
Great imagery and wording
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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peaceful
This leaves the reader feeling peaceful and relaxed. Nice imagery. Personally I would prefer the touch was real and not in a dream or fantasy. That would give me as the reader a warmer feeling. Being in a dream conveys hope in a fantasy rather than the comfort of reality. -
Oh, how I wish those soft clouds would enter my dreams. I am such a happy person during the day, but at night, when I sleep, the demons from the past plague me in dreams. Your poem has a healing quality that only you can do so well!
Shana
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WOW This is sensational.
serenty is painted with your words
Love
Delila
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wow...so peaceful..
Would love to sleep on a could for a day!
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very nice as the sun picks up these vapors sending them far and wide with the wind directing them. I love the clouds.
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and now i feel i should stretch and yawn... and lie down for a heavenly nap.
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coupled with this dreamlike background, your words take on such a heavenly feel. I really do like this poem, Poet. Love, lane
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This is great!! Fills one's heart with peace and contentment! What wonderful thoughts you have given to me this afternoon!
Best of luck in this contest!!
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Very Nice Short Write This is beautiful Dear. I wish you the best of luck with it in the contest. Cara
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