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Be Without You

No matter what you do ,no matter what you say...I just can’t be without you.
Even when you go off to see her and forget all about me,I still can’t be without you.
Every time I’m away from you night or day even for awhile it feels like an eternity that we have been apart.
And I just can’t be without you.
In the middle of the night I can’t sleep knowing that I won’t be able to feel your touch as you run your strong hands all over my body.
Even then I can’t be without you, I know you might still feel something for her since she was your first beloved one.
But to me it doesn’t even matter cause even though I know deep down that you still love her and love me too.
I still can’t be without you.

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  • soccer220
    February 21, 2008

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    Very good... I really like it! Yes, many of us have that special "someone" in our lives who we can't live without. Thanks for entering and good luck!