Motion and beauty.
Whisper-light touch of fingertips over my
arching, needing, ripe and juicy body.
Weeks, feels like months, without your caress.
The motion and beauty
our bodies create together.
My body responds.
Physical touch wipes out times spent alone.
Each touched inch, aflame.
Tongue replaces fingers.
Wet touch hotter than dry,
your liquid fire reaching to my very core.
I can wait no longer.
Reaching, searching, finding my returned love.
Lasting touch for touch.
The taste of you on my tongue,
the need to feel you deep inside,
to once again be one.
Lets come together again,
Here and now in our bed of love
and renew our timeless bond.
Author notes
CiDiLiCiouS
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A contest entry
- Championship Challenge - Round 3 by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended February 3, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great depth and self-understanding. It reads as real, raw, instinctual...
You can own the cliched expressions (always the most powerful) as you have experienced them personally.
The last verse is witty, with the pun in 'come'.
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Thank you westley
and I am glad to see you picked up on the pun, so to speak lol
Cindy
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Wow, very worth the gold, love the sensuality in your words. Very classy indeed
Adriana
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Thank you Adriana, Your too kind, I m still in shock over the gold lol. I appreciate your words
Cindy
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Congratulations on the Gold sweetheart, it was so well deserved. I am so very proud of you.
Love always
Mum
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Beautifully done! This has so many elements to it, both obvious and hidden. I love the deep passion that is spilled over the page in your words.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
your a wnderful writer wow
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I really like this one. My style is always so rhyme, so I tend to only like them, but this one was great. "The taste of you on my tongue, the need to feel you deep inside, to once again be one." I really like this one, especially the last line And even with few words, still is a hott poem
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Yes yours is so rhyme, I love that about you cause as I said I so don't rhyme lol. But I am glad you could enjoy it anyways, Like many win me over with their rhyming, I can only hope to do the same with my non-rhyming lol
Thanks again
Cindy
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Oh my! I'm at work and I shouldn't be reading this. Now I need a cold shower. The imagery in your writing is pure magic.
Love,
Amera♥
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ohh sorry u were at work lol. Tahnks Amera, I definetly try for pure magic hehehe
Cindy
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Wow! I LOVE it!! sensual, touch of erotic, just right... I'll definitely read more of you!
Great write!!
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A w thanks you, I can only hope you enjoy my other erotic & normal ones as much as this
Thanks again
Cindy
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Brilliant sweetheart. Your longing came through so strong and in such a way that it could be felt. You chose beautiful, sensual words to describe your feelings. Best wishes in the contest.
Margaret
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Thanks Mum
Much appreciated
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