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The Two Of Us

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Together my friend, we have come this far
now living our lives under many a star.
A sausage for you and one for me
as together we share a life so free.

Once so rich, the world at my feet
I had it all with a life so complete,
you had the best of everything money could buy
staying firmly with me when I was left high and dry.

An educated man, thought I knew all the tricks
yet my so called friends fleeced me real quick,
eventually left dressed in poverty's clothes
as others walked by with their stuck up nose.

You are the one true light who stayed by my side
following me everywhere, on with life together we stride,
your love unconditional, no matter the cost
I feel life has blessed me, nothing true have I lost.

We look like we have nothing, but our lives are our own
as we roam the world I know my wisdom has grown,
a hobo I may now be, but with riches untold
to have you my friend, is like finding pure gold.











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Picture - "Hobo and Dog" by Norman Rockwell

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  • a good piece, when i was a younger man, not that i am that old now but... i thought i would end up a tramp, and there is still yet for that to be achieved, so can i have a sausage please, i might get hungry later.

  • Rudolf
    March 6, 2008

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    I had a feeling, through out your write
    it was about two, who travel real light
    deserving of gold,a message clear sent
    highest commitment, unconditional intent
    sharing their love, put life on the line
    inseparable pair, shared by you in ryhme
    rudolf




  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    Thanks for entering this one again to Good luck with it You know hehe you didn't have to enter the same ones just to let you know hehe but thats ok this was great

  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    January 28, 2008
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    This is very nice has great rhyme and flow. Thank you for taking the time to enter this into my contest. I wish you the best of luck.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 28, 2008

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    wow gran you always outdo yourself with your own writes and i love the way you pen a strong message in this best of luck

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 28, 2008

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    Now this is great, there is something about people like this that intruiges me... in the street or wherever I always wonder about their stories and how they ended up there.... you have spun a wonderful tale with perfect rhyme as always... goodluck in this contest, I doubt it needs it

    Karen

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